As a part of our Narrative unit we are trying to improve our descriptive writing. Our goal is to improve our descriptive language to help the reader understand the setting
I was traveling through the deep dark forest when a castle in the distance. The castle had a large creaky door. Looked up at the window. The window had cracks in it. The flag was ripped and was on its slide. The bricks were cracked and moldy. The chimney was cracked and blew out dirty yellow smoke.
The draw bridge was cracked. The moat was over flowing.....
Kia Ora Jasmine,
ReplyDeleteThis castle is easy to imagine because of the vivid description in your writing.
The next step is to use a variety of descriptive words as this creates even more vivid images.
Mr Thurlow